HEY, sorry for the delay in answering, but I wanted to have the change to tell you that the story is LIVE now (and due to an unexpected internet outage I haven't been able to read it in its current form yet, but I hear it's more of a happy ending - which was always my hope, because the vid was supposed to act more like a teaser trailer)
I'm really glad for your compliments and that you enjoyed the vid!