Oh! Such a great story - I love everything about it. Loved how Jensen never lost sight of the fact that Jared was well, Jared, first and not an experiment, even if I knew the army would quickly ignore that. Loved moral dilemma and how Jensen didn't hesitate. I also really loved the way you kept the tension buried somewhat between them, so that the reader knew that Jensen wasn't trying to save Jared just because they had a relationship, but that he risked everything because it was the right thing to do. I so hope someday there are more chapters in this, how they start their new life and how they face the challenges ahead. Just lovely. :)
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I so hope someday there are more chapters in this, how they start their new life and how they face the challenges ahead.
Just lovely. :)