ext_29984 ([identity profile] roseincognitus.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mangacat201 2012-01-28 06:53 pm (UTC)

Oh! Such a great story - I love everything about it. Loved how Jensen never lost sight of the fact that Jared was well, Jared, first and not an experiment, even if I knew the army would quickly ignore that. Loved moral dilemma and how Jensen didn't hesitate. I also really loved the way you kept the tension buried somewhat between them, so that the reader knew that Jensen wasn't trying to save Jared just because they had a relationship, but that he risked everything because it was the right thing to do.
I so hope someday there are more chapters in this, how they start their new life and how they face the challenges ahead.
Just lovely. :)

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