Ouh, thatt was fun! I like every story that plays in the land or n the rules of the Fey, and you proved yourself a very skillful writer to this setting. I liked how you wove Ben into this, even though I'm not such a big fan of Ben-joining-the-Winchesters-stories. But this worked and it wasn't too mushy and crazy enough to work.
As a fellow German, I also want to assure you of your writing and style. It is really good and maybe it's because it has some German sentence-structure, but I really think that's not the case. Also, it is very refreshing to find someone who has a similar use for comma-placement. There are a lot of stories out there that are a bit hard to read for me.
So, congratulations for this story and you accomplishment. I really like how you wove this plot and if I imagine all the once-dead hunters (John, Mary...) still dead and not really "there", that is entirely my own choice ;-)
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Date: 2010-07-28 09:24 am (UTC)As a fellow German, I also want to assure you of your writing and style. It is really good and maybe it's because it has some German sentence-structure, but I really think that's not the case. Also, it is very refreshing to find someone who has a similar use for comma-placement. There are a lot of stories out there that are a bit hard to read for me.
So, congratulations for this story and you accomplishment. I really like how you wove this plot and if I imagine all the once-dead hunters (John, Mary...) still dead and not really "there", that is entirely my own choice ;-)